Logbook

The Original Strip

The original strip marks the beginning of a work-up process.

Hiking Day was a spontaneous project for a competition. So I didn’t give much thought to the layout and used the usual 3-panel grid.

n retrospect, the fourth panel of the newspaper strip layout would have been useful for developing Motti’s thoughts about grilling on the hot stone more clearly.

I will now do this during the reworking process.